Undying Love


My first attempt at 55 word fiction.









Donna coughed out blood again. She had made the final phone call.

Sam. She closed her eyes.

Please. I’ve to see you one last time.

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Sam held her head in his arms. A tear escaped his eyes.

“Donna,” he whispered in broken words, “you… cunt… die…”


“CUT!” the director hollered. “Sir, it’s you can’t die.”






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8 comments:

  1. phatichar1 February 2012 at 23:25

    ROTFL :')

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    1. cmus2 February 2012 at 01:17

      55word fiction - Inspired by you first ;]

      And one more blogger actually [IndianaRonaldo]

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    2. phatichar2 February 2012 at 16:31

      It's hilarious. Way to go, dude. :)

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  2. Giribala4 February 2012 at 01:37

    What a twisted tale! Very funny!!

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  3. Nim2 March 2012 at 13:32

    Head out of the gutter for sometime atleast :P

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    1. cmus10 March 2012 at 00:20

      Do you remember someone typing, 'I cunt cum that day' [I couldn't come] on group chat way long back?

      #Inspiration for this fiction.

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  4. Gaya20 May 2012 at 10:57

    Wordplay...loved it :D :D

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